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Can someone hlep me write a conclusion and give advice? I find it difficult?

Karen-619 asked:


My four paragraphs are about the specialties within the Business Administration field each paragraph descibes one career what they do ,what they need, outlook and abilities.
Im finding a hard time wrtting a conclusion Heres my Intro:

Business Administration is my field of interest because I love working with numbers and people, and I enjoy problem solving. I was introduce and motivated to enter this field by my sister-in-law, I saw that she has a professional job that she enjoys and has a great salary. This made me realize that I wanted to be someone successful in the future just like her. There are different specialties within this field that I am passionate about, such as Account Manager, Financial Analyst, Management Consultant, and Property or Community Association Manager

Please help me!!!

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4 Responses to “Can someone hlep me write a conclusion and give advice? I find it difficult?”

1. Froggygirl1357 says:

   January 17, 2008 at 4:09 pm

   The buisness administration is a great place for me to work at. I can say that this is one of the best jobs. Thanks!
2. rubber ducky says:

   January 19, 2008 at 6:40 pm

   thats not an intro ,more of a body paraghraph. in your intro you should discuss what your going to wite about in the next four paraghraphs. like” i tooked a great interst in blaaah bllahh …… do to …… , …… ,… but esspecialyy …….. no clue for a conclusion but dont ended by saying” in conclusion….” thats so middle school.
3. duttydharsaan says:

   January 21, 2008 at 10:44 pm

   I belive that the Buisness Administration field an excellent field for aspiring managers. It comes with a nice salary and I can work with people, and numbers. I love these the most.

   Hope i helped.
4. mschick_2007 says:

   January 24, 2008 at 11:35 am

   ‘While these specialties are all very different, they each draw my attention because of [something that works for you]. I think that because I like the field so much, I would be willing to work harder to reach my goal. [or I would not refrain from working hard to reach my goal.]‘

   add a few more sentences using your brain. good luck.